Spring is full of green grass and blossom Prancing daisies dance in the wind Racing leaves blowing in the breeze I see children playing Nine or ten daffodils grown on the grass Going outside to play
Your poem is a very exciting one, Joe, full of life and movement. I especially liked the daisies dancing in the wind. It reminded me of William Wordsworth's dancing daffodils.I think your poem is also very carefully crafted with super sound effects. Well done for using alliteration! It makes your poem lovely to read out loud, which is what we should do with poems!
Your poem is a very exciting one, Joe, full of life and movement. I especially liked the daisies dancing in the wind. It reminded me of William
ReplyDeleteWordsworth's dancing daffodils.I think your poem is also very carefully crafted with super sound effects. Well done for using alliteration! It
makes your poem lovely to read out loud, which is what we should do with poems!