29 Mar 2012

Chick
by Laura (Mole Class)



Chicks hatch from their eggs
Hedgehogs come out from their sleep
In the gardens the flowers explode
Cows have their babies
Kids go out to play
Posted by at

2 comments:

  1. Mrs Henderson12 April, 2012

    Hi Laura, Really lovely poem, I like the way you describe the flowers as 'exploding'. Hope you had a lovely Easter, see you next Wednesday.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Mrs Murkin12 April, 2012

    Your poem is full of action and new life, Laura, just like Spring. I think my favourite part is where you describe the flowers as exploding. Spring colours do seem to burst out in front of you, bright yellows and reds and deep blues.

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)